Video link: myfoodthing.mp4
FINAL TUTORIAL NOTES 290425
– Angel – it tells the story in a different way, not just a standard document.
– Framework of an official government document, the grid within it, as a way to intersperse the story
– Start of project, taking away, doing the same thing here. Ripping the document. Wish you did it literally. Physically engage with the document, exploration through materiality could be more meaningful.
– Perhaps use a blow up of document as scale, rip[ing it away like a poster.
– Different document underneath, birth certificate to driver’s license or marriage certificate, could offer a chance to speak about these stages of life, at those moments.
– Interesting way of a story, telling it through the medium of the birth certificate. There is room for doing it with other government documents. We need them, but they don’t really say anything about US.
– Some moments to illustrative in the video – big syringe, don’t need to illustrate everything! Don’t need the image, perhaps just keep moments. No need to fill the whole thing. Let the conversation happen.
– Needs an edit/art direction stage to come back to it. Practicality stopped that stage, problem with timing on the MA.
– Does this lend itself to something imprint in the next stage?
– Gayatri: liked the stamps, could they have stayed? Could the document at the end keep those. Houman – the stamps are a chance to express feelings.
– Document changed at the end, but it could be more obvious, take it further?
– Victoria – this could be layered, the official stuff at the top, the new, personal stuff underneath.
CONCLUSIONS:
– Another level of iteration would have been great, but no time.
– Documents as expressions of identity the theme right now, take forward into Positions through contextualising. Add depth to them.